Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Just A Game Comments

Rating: 4.5

i thought we had something
i was the only one who didn't see
the guy i thought you were
is a guy you'll never be
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lindsay rose
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Noel Horlanda 16 July 2009

a female who doesn't rely in her brain instead believed in her heart is always the loser. In other words you learn your way by mistakes. Think twice first before you decide..Well penned. thanks

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Jasmine Dugas 15 July 2009

amazing poem....keep it up

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Little Hatila ;) 15 July 2009

'i don't think you meant to hurt me its just how you play the game in the end i lost because you never felt the same ' well we live and learn, all we can do is to be careful......extremely beautiful..........10 Hataw

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