Wednesday, November 24, 2004

Just A Flower? Comments

Rating: 2.8

A most unusual flower,
of colours, oh so bright.
A tropical rainshower,
an early morning flight.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 24 November 2004

Yes, I think you may be right. Re-reading my own poem I received an innate signal plus an exogenous one to my lacrimal apparatus, so I may have to re-invent the ending. I must admit I prefer Happy Ends.

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Lenchen Elf 24 November 2004

Lovely poem H, perhaps she had not gone with someone else but lived her natural cycle and returned to the earth?

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