Sunday, July 4, 2010

Just A Facade. Comments

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Just a facade.
Everybody think that your this smiling pretty girl.
They will never understand, they will never could help.
It will always be me, the only one who can help myself.
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Bella Hoeiriis
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Bella Hoeiriis 06 July 2010

Well, thank you Afzal. And Darrin this is actually a inspiration from my life.

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 06 July 2010

I like this one, it seems kind of bleek, but sometimes you need to be down, way down to come up with a plan to get back up. I know finding true understanding is like finding true love, difficult at best, but first you need to understand your situation before you can communicate it. You should go over this poem and edit it.

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Afzal Shauq 06 July 2010

thanks for sharing..its a sweet write and quite impressive too

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