Just A Dream Remembered... Comments
I think I know you
For I've seen in the silence of the night-
A debonair silhouette against the mistiness
Before I caught your wayward gleam.
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Lovely writing. The two uses of 'thy' are either essential or uncomfortable. Perhaps the poem would be more timeless, without them?
A beautiful poem. Your last two lines are my favourites: 'I playback the sound of your lurking footsteps/And rehearse the sound of thy subtle breath... '. Top score!
Beautiful sublime poetry. Paints a wonderful pic for the reader.
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7/24/2025 8:51:07 PM # 1.0.0
Nicely inked. Loved it. Thanks.