Thursday, November 17, 2016

Just A Doll Comments

Rating: 4.5

What if I said, that I just want to be alone,
Away from the constant critics and all your shallow truths;
Away from you and your never-ending words,
Which have been nothing but hollow lies and sugar coated words,
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Jazib Kamalvi 04 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Pepper. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 18 November 2016

Being a slave or puppet to another's convenience in love, is well depicted in the poem. An insightful piece of poetry, nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with insight. Thanks for sharing Sanders. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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