Saturday, February 1, 2020

Just A Disguise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Price tag, personality 90% off,
Way off, not well-off
Saving little, no longer a face, just a disguise,
Dressed down from all the criticism, wearing all that examination around like it suits him
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Eillio Imbasciati
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Bri Edwards 02 March 2020

i THOUGHT this sounded familiar. been here, commented already. :)

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Bri Edwards 18 February 2020

i like: " So much baggage, he'd be at the airport all day" , but for most people [maybe me] there is too much symbolism in the poem, i fear. but some readers will eat this up! ! ! bri ;)

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Unwritten Soul 02 February 2020

If you want to sail, lift the anchor if you want to fly, lift the wings If you want to live, lift the worries may you always be fine, not a burden to disguise

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Haruna Garba 01 February 2020

Way off, not well-off Dubious of course Thanks for sharing.

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