Price tag, personality 90% off,
Way off, not well-off
Saving little, no longer a face, just a disguise,
Dressed down from all the criticism, wearing all that examination around like it suits him
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i like: " So much baggage, he'd be at the airport all day" , but for most people [maybe me] there is too much symbolism in the poem, i fear. but some readers will eat this up! ! ! bri ;)
If you want to sail, lift the anchor if you want to fly, lift the wings If you want to live, lift the worries may you always be fine, not a burden to disguise
i THOUGHT this sounded familiar. been here, commented already. :)