Saturday, October 29, 2016

Just A Cybernetic Message.......... Comments

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You being a chick in our nest
when took to your tenderly wings,
on test, for the first time
Something, I remember, truly bothered me
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Valsa George 05 December 2016

Lovely poem marked with that special feeling a father has for his child.... Also a reminder in his hectic life not to forget an important day of sweet wishes which his mother rightly deserves!

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 November 2016

Solace in mind! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Elena Sandu 09 November 2016

Beautiful poem, it captures the reader's wonders, as a parent I can find many things to read between the lines.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 14 November 2016

Thank you Elena for your observations and comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 November 2016

Beautiful and powerful poem this is really. Very nicely birthday wish is conveyed. This gives inner soul a nice feeling. Brightening up the little nest is interesting really.10

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 09 November 2016

Thank you Kumar for the comment

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Christopher Tye 07 November 2016

Really beautiful poem, a very special treat for someone.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 07 November 2016

Thank you Chris for your generous comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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