Tuesday, December 30, 2008
Just A Child Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Her face is cut and dirty,
Her clothes are ripped and torn,
She sheltered under door-ways;
Weary and forlorn.
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Lindsey Ashton
30 December 2008
this is sad but true, nice write, i was quite getting into it, good rhyming and bounce, i just wanted it to be a little longer, but a definate 10
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7/27/2025 8:43:03 PM # 1.0.0
Its sad; but true. you are really good and i love reading all your peoms. i like the way you ryme most of them and you can read them with a swing. =]