Wednesday, November 18, 2015

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This heart is a leaf,
Upon which you spread
Like a color
Young, you keep me
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Simone Inez Harriman 19 November 2015

I love your poem Tiku. Even though the leaf is likened to man being deserted by love in it's prime the leaf contains the most glorious autumn colors. By eventually assuming the color of the earth the leaf becomes whole as part and parcel of the richness of it's creator.....10

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