Sophy's mom sent her a giant case of 'Fun dip' - a thousand packets of sour, fruit-flavored sugar. Is there anything more junkavore a parent can buy a child - well, ok, an 18 year old?
She LOVES them and so does Leong who's from China where, apparently, you can't get useless, non-nutritional snacks. The two of them are running around, all sugar hyped with their emo-grape-chemical-lips, sticking out phosphorescent-green-tongues and threatening to tickle everyone with cherry-red-fingers. It has me wondering, should I switch to dentistry?
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you may look down my throat any time, ...with no mask required. bri : )
Kim is a fine poet and seems to be a fine person as well, and is OLDER than I am! ! Let me see more of yours.
In case you don't know, Kim's reterence to 'down in the mouth' I think was his attempt at a joke.
I plan to read more of yours; I can sleep till 10 OR 11, at age 74 and retired. Ha ha! : ) bri
(CONT.) ...but I found this to be one of the very-most entertaining poems I've seen on PH in a long time. five stars. bri : )
Anais, your 'poem' was, for me, .very 'peachy'? and made me nearly 'blagabloo' (sort of) . So, except for the sort-of-stanza formata of your writing, it did not strike be as a POEM. ...
I don't think I write poems as much as stories - most of the time. I don't like rhyme
Yes, by all means switch to dentistry --- unless you don't like to always be feeling down in the mouth.
I'm not sure I could look at people's teeth all day - that sounds pretty repetitious and limited.
Beware, Anais! My friend Bri has started to follow you! Don't walk down any dark alleys! And be prepared to be bombarded with multiple comments on every poem...