Tuesday, August 9, 2022

Junkavore Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sophy's mom sent her a giant case of 'Fun dip' - a thousand packets of sour, fruit-flavored sugar. Is there anything more junkavore a parent can buy a child - well, ok, an 18 year old?

She LOVES them and so does Leong who's from China where, apparently, you can't get useless, non-nutritional snacks. The two of them are running around, all sugar hyped with their emo-grape-chemical-lips, sticking out phosphorescent-green-tongues and threatening to tickle everyone with cherry-red-fingers. It has me wondering, should I switch to dentistry?
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Kim Barney 18 August 2022

Beware, Anais! My friend Bri has started to follow you! Don't walk down any dark alleys! And be prepared to be bombarded with multiple comments on every poem...

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Bri Edwards 18 August 2022

you may look down my throat any time, ...with no mask required. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 18 August 2022

Kim is a fine poet and seems to be a fine person as well, and is OLDER than I am! ! Let me see more of yours.

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Bri Edwards 18 August 2022

In case you don't know, Kim's reterence to 'down in the mouth' I think was his attempt at a joke.

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Kim Barney 18 August 2022

Ah, Bri, I never could slip a subtle one past you, could I?

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Bri Edwards 18 August 2022

I plan to read more of yours; I can sleep till 10 OR 11, at age 74 and retired. Ha ha! : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 18 August 2022

(CONT.) ...but I found this to be one of the very-most entertaining poems I've seen on PH in a long time. five stars. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 18 August 2022

Anais, your 'poem' was, for me, .very 'peachy'? and made me nearly 'blagabloo' (sort of) . So, except for the sort-of-stanza formata of your writing, it did not strike be as a POEM. ...

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anais vionet 18 August 2022

I don't think I write poems as much as stories - most of the time. I don't like rhyme

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Kim Barney 09 August 2022

Yes, by all means switch to dentistry --- unless you don't like to always be feeling down in the mouth.

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anais vionet 09 August 2022

I'm not sure I could look at people's teeth all day - that sounds pretty repetitious and limited.

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