Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Jungle Of Life Comments

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In the jungle of life
There were many silt trails
I sunk to the bottom
Of the tricky mud
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Ibnu Din Assingkiri
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Heather Wilkins 09 October 2013

oh the jungle of life can be so cruel. but we must trudge on. nice write

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 October 2013

A painful full of human grief and folly A lovely poem I like this and request the Hon. poets, please read and comment/ PH should notice this poem thank you Glory to be Allah

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Philo Yan 05 October 2013

What does not harm you will not kill you. Life can be a struggle sometimes. Perseverance is the key. And you have skillfully covered that in this poem.

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Mahadevan Krishnan 03 October 2013

inspiring, it is. i like the last stanza especially.

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Singkir Laut, Kedah, Malaysia
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