Thursday, September 10, 2020

Jungle Of Hope Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'm lost in the jungle of hope
I have lost myself
The shadow of happiness has turned its face
I have awakened a new wave of sorrow
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Shakira Nandini
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Khairul Ahsan 14 November 2020

'The forest of hope was very dark I lost my way I have lit a love lamp And extinguished all the lamps' - loved these lines of hope amid dark despair.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 September 2020

i commented on this one yesterday where did the words go you must acknowledge poets you know

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Hannington Mumo 10 September 2020

A hope-inspiring piece...penned with a knowing wit, all delicately immersed in the dying embers of simmering despair; which lingering qualms and doubts now seem to give way to a gradually firmer faith in fledgling optimism and her manifold stregths. A positive harbinger - portending the pristine looming of bright virgin shores, and the hesitating but decisive closing of the old. Kudos!

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M Asim Nehal 10 September 2020

A fight with self to discover the truth, nicely composed poem.10+++

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