Jungle Morning, Deadly Dance Comments

A tale twice told. Again, you've done a marvelous job. The adventure and excitement grasp and holds the attention. PS: happy for the positive outcome. Thank you Captain.

Walterrean Sally is a poet to remember always for her beautiful poetry, this poem is special for the nursery-rhyme syllabic beats...twinkle twinkle little star...enjoyed reading it! ! !

What a wonderful journey through the woods where the song bird and her brood met with her formidable foe, the Viper! ! How in the end the Viper succumbs to his own fury! Oh, Captain, if the children happen to read this tale, they will hail you as their hero and congregate together to listen to your fantastic yarns! ! At this age also, I read it with the curiosity of a child in one breath! !

double joy , one for the story other for the poem with sweet rhyme...a neat and clean, superb and enjoyed fully..10