Sunday, February 12, 2006

Jungle Jim Comments

Rating: 4.5

Jungle JIm was in the shallows
washing out some dirty plates
he came down from his jungle palace
in a tree hut by the lake
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Charles M Moore
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Will Barber 27 May 2006

This certainly brightened my morning. The pun on 'Jungle Gym' was amusing. By the second stanza, I was thinking - oh, this fellow's making fun of ME! Sent me off in gales of laughter, this one did. Plus, there's a message in there for us all. Absolutely a delight. I liked the parrot. I liked the ending. I appreciated a bright start to my day.

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Mary Nagy 26 March 2006

Loved it Charles! Yes, I could see this being a very cute cartoon. :) sincerely, Mary

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Patricia Gale 21 March 2006

Very cute write, made me smile. Patricia

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

Glasgow Scotland.
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