Thursday, August 14, 2014

Jungle Comments

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Filled with predators,
That is still our world today.
Only it is gray.
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Sana Olivia Hernandez
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Daniel Brick 14 August 2014

Very nice. It's sharp, as sharp as a samurai sword, cutting to the quick. Not nature's jungles which are innocent in animals' pursuit of survival but the urban jungle where the predator is human and the prey is human. The haiku gets point across in a split second, but in prose you have to spell it out and weaken the impact.

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Sana Olivia Hernandez

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