Jungle... Comments

I am very moved by this work. You leave undefined the flowers and the thorns. They may represent good and bad. They may represent youth and wisdom....there is a balance of exuberance and optimism, and a hint of maturity and caution. Well done!

Nothing is permanent! Like falling leaves and withering petals, life will also come to its eventual decay! Thoughtful write!

So in a seminar or knowledge center, it must be like a tree full of leaves...so green :) hahahaha...wonderful idea, mind is like a tree...it keeps on growing, renewing and so lively..we can have different aesthatic tree shape by having unique mind!

when trees are not in order otherwise its is a garden

beauty and ugliness in good and bad sin and grace dwelt in a same soul the death is the swift taker of all in a paleness of times/ share and bright

The poem is an eye opener. Nice structure and a novelty. A new way to look at things. Thank you.

this one inspired me to write something on almost the same pattern! a good poem! thank you Ali bhai!

u don't waste a single word and the idea is fully expressed....well that's great...Read ur other poems as well...ur writing style is impressive.

Wow nice metaphor poem! Great to read. In my urdu i'd say bohot khoob. Pls coment my latest poem