Friday, June 14, 2013

June Comments

Rating: 5.0

June burst forth with sunshine blest
Buds awakening on the stem of trees
Life awakens like a treasure chest
And butterflies flutter in the breeze.
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Patricia Grantham 18 June 2013

June heralds the beginning of Summer. With it's fresh spring flowers, glowing sunshine and wafting warm breezes. Ah! The joy of it all! A good write. I invite you to read my poem Just Imagine and Diamonds in the Sky

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Heather Wilkins 17 June 2013

a lovely nature poem. June a beautiful month of the year.

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Heather Wilkins 17 June 2013

a lovely nature poem. June a beautiful month of the year.

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Hans Vr 14 June 2013

You capture the scene of a warm June day with all the wonders of spring in a fantastic and melodious poem. As a reader i felt immersed in the scene and can really enjoy. Excellent poem, David

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David Wood 14 June 2013

You're right val. A signet is a smal seal used for stamping documents. Thats where signet ring comes from. Well spotted.

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Valerie Dohren 14 June 2013

Lovely seasonal poem David. May I be so bold as to point out you have misspelled 'signets' - should be cygnets. Doesn't detract from the beauty of your poem, of course - just me being a spelloholic!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 June 2013

Buds awakening on the stem of trees And butterflies flutter in the breeze Beautifully described spring time and all the activity. Please also read my poem 'Spring is Here' when you have time. Thank you.

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Hart Lauretta 14 June 2013

this is very creative, good jobs

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Paul Brookes 14 June 2013

Lovely poem about june gone down hill since sad to say. Great nature poem BB : O)

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Kevin Halls 14 June 2013

Another cracking poem David your nature poems are spot on. As I work outdoors I know only too well about our weather!

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