Sunday, October 28, 2018

June 28th,2018 11: 26 P.M.: Happiness Eludes Me Comments

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One assumption spurs it all.
Time slows to a crawl and the walls become a heavy shawl.
My heart beats faster and faster,
the salty streams flow more aggressively than ever.
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Samantha McKinnon
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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 October 2018

Samantha, such a well expressed poem..........................

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Chinedu Dike 28 October 2018

Well conceived and nicely penned with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Samantha.

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Dave Walker 28 October 2018

Break ups are never easy, but time starts to help ease the pain. Great poem.

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