Monday, November 17, 2014

Jump To Heaven In Time Comments

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Oh people come this is precious time,
For stabilizing mind no need of dime.
Rhyme comes in mind for our father,
Father comes to watch us soon further.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Kalpana Barik 11 October 2020

Jumping towards heaven with light of knowledge is great. This is indeed great write!

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Dogma Daniman 10 October 2020

Jump to heaven with wisdom and joy. Jump in to wisdom with satisfaction. Nice poem.

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Luo Zhihai 10 October 2020

This poem speaks our hearts! I like it!

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Luo Zhihai 10 October 2020

Oh come on sow soon knowledge seed. Speak our hearts!

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Pushpendra Patel 05 March 2019

Humps are obstacles but slowly we can overcome these. A nice poem is shared.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 October 2018

said lovely - Commits God for us to take us to heaven, Meditate to purify mind body soon leaven.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 October 2015

Be in soul and, fill the muse of the truth with your inner self. Thanks for sharing.

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Ramesh Rai 18 November 2014

Time makes rain of nectar you soon catch, Come on in row to meditate batch by batch. Detach from body conscious be in soul pose, Jump to heaven in time to sit in throne of rose. A soulful write.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 November 2014

A poem on time and its importance- last line- Jump to heaven in time to sit in throne of rose... marvelous invigorating and viable thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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