Thursday, September 14, 2017

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I knew a moment, once,
that was tadpole to a frog; a spit of pond
that seemed to be an ocean to its spawn.
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Troy Cochran
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2017

A poem of consciousness and depthness. Appropriate title. :)

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Troy Cochran 17 September 2017

By definition, a poem about the Infinite cannot but have depth. In retrospect, I see that this poem lacks the devotional presence-of-mind that is so evident in your work. Here, I am mostly astounded at how much of that Infinite is ever present in and around me, but at such a high frequency that I count myself fortunate if it only jump-starts my morning and prepares me for the rest of the afternoon. Thank you for commenting. :)

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Toppenish, WA
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