Jump Of Verses Comments

i love ur poem it is kind of interesting and its title is eye catching.

haha so short and sweet......for me it relieves boredom at work, and sometimes stress ;)

Very good verses like fire expressed, obtain...10.

bomb of words...good piece 10

For someone....... It might be the one who cross the tin yellow line to reach the hail 's gate and bring back the key of dream The brave one who distroy with his mind power bomds before they kill loverones....the one.....

Hi Tsira, An Excellent write that reads like well thought out quotation.

Witty … on 'roundabout' adults too want...// 10!

it is a must... Profound....thanks for sharing 10

Nice short piece on jump. For someone it may be from hill top to sea, for someone it is sea to Evarest, and for you it is very nice, and for me it is an idea!

fine verses to muse about...a 10.

And for all it is hope nice write 10