Thursday, August 27, 2020

Jump Into The Well Of Wisdom..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart cries, what my eye sees
When poets are indulged in silly things
Instead of showcasing their creativity
They fall in the trap of stupidity
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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 30 August 2020

Wisely thought poem, answer to many poets.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2020

Well of wisdom will give rising essence to poets. There is no need to fight or compete. Poets should be generous, cooperative and friendly. Amazing poem is very wonderfully penned...10

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Harris Perry 28 August 2020

Well said message nicely delivered.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2020

Wisdom! ! ! ! Following after righteous steps of love and life; Uplifting righteous works. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 August 2020

A well crafted poem. Truly inspiring...10+++++++

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Poetic Sky 28 August 2020

Great poem. I liked the satire and message which is loud and clear.

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 August 2020

Very well written poem. It did not cross the decency line nor did it hurt anyone but using titles you conveyed your message.10

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Rini Shibu 27 August 2020

True..some are behind silly things and fights

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Deepak S S 27 August 2020

A great remider to all poets. Nicely done.

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S H 27 August 2020

Wow using titles of all great poets you have written this magnificent poem.10

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Anjandev Roy 27 August 2020

Magnificent poem.....wonderful to read......anjandev roy.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 August 2020

Jump into the well of " Wisdom" And become " A Wise" ......yeah, really have to come to the kingdom of wisdom avoiding illiterate argument and meaningless penning and be wise

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Rajnish Manga 27 August 2020

I'm convinced that it carries the outrage that many of us feel against 'silly things' unleashed by some fellow poets on this forum. You are emphatic in your assertion with a friendly as under: Instead of showcasing their creativity They fall in the trap of stupidity.... //.... Let's hope a better sense will prevail on them after taking a dip in the well of wisdom. Thanks, Asim ji.

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Sharad Bhatia 27 August 2020

Good pronunciation for the new beginner poet. Yes, sometimes when we (learners) use words, we ourselves do not know which words to use or not. Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful poem

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Kostas Lagos 27 August 2020

Really clever poem! Brilliant!

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