Sunday, October 1, 2017

Jump Comments

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Donnie loved to jump from trees for fun.
Just as much as he loved to run.
One day he jumped and landed on his butt.
Turning it a deep shade of red.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2018

A beautiful poem on jump having nice expression and fine collocation. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Sister Frances 02 October 2017

For he landed on his head He'd be laying there dead... Poor Donnie the monkey they said :)

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Practicing Poetess 01 October 2017

He was very lucky indeed that he didn't land on his head- - the other end is much better cushioned! Okay, Lamar, I just noticed your new poem because I also have a new one up. Would you please take a look at 'Tall, Willowy Girl' and comment? Thanks. Much appreciated! Your short ones are usually very cute and funny, as is this one! :) Good morning, by the way.

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