Jumbo Jet Versus The Jackdaw Comments

Great poem! Birds' flight is so superior to man-made flight. Interesting that nobody doubts the intellgence of the designers of airplanes, but some say birds just came about by chance.

You write beautifully from my heart I feel without any seal

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Wonderful imagination, melodiously expressed. Good rhymes. Would be really nice to glide like an eagle

I know what you mean, I always wished to do same as you, but I never wanted to do it with earthly construction and big pieces of iron, but only of my own. Maybe some day we will be able to do it, I never gave up on my dream.

wow! acracking poem, really i love it... i wish you success.....10

I envisioned myself flying while I read this. Wonderful feeling. Good poem!

Love this, freedom. The rhyme contained in each second line works well. Not sure about the 2 apostrophes in line 11 if it is the word them should it not be 'em to indicate missing letters? Regardless the flow is good and the ideas soars. Thank you for this poem.

Love this, freedom. The rhyme contained in each second line works well. Not sure about the 2 apostrophes in line 11 if it is the word them should it not be 'em to indicate missing letters? Regardless the flow is good and the ideas soars. Thank you for this poem.

Dats d bomb baby d bomb! !