Saturday, October 6, 2012

July Sky Comments

Rating: 4.7

The sky is pouring all day long,
Water from it's pitch dark pot.
The trees, plants and shrubs so got
Relieved from that scorching hot.
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Neela Nath Das
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R.j. Wynn 21 May 2013

Beautiful poem again, focused so well.

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Savita Tyagi 06 October 2012

Beautiful soothing poem. Love the conversation of rain and clouds. All that whisper of nature that we long to hear standing by the window.

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Teslim Badmus 06 October 2012

The earth shakes hand with smiling tree...ds ending is fabulous and very personifying.good work keep it up.

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