July Rain In Seattle (Haiku) Comments

Thank you for the invitation to read this wonderfully constructed poem. I am very fond of this format of poetry! Thank for the informative notes as well!

What a lovely photo, and sounds like you have had a good sleep in Seattle (rather than sleepless)

Beautiful expressions. Poetry will be very stagnated if we do not go beyond conventional rules. I too am often guilty if it. Thanks for sharing.

Such fine drizzle it comes under the umbrella on my morning walk. Doubly misty view through droplet-lenses beaded on eyeglass lenses It brings relief the brown grass was waiting for, even in RAIN CITY Pricks of coolness offer proof, my skin was endowed for subtle pleasures I wake up happy for the plants, they have been giving me so much green Doorway spider on beaded web rubs droplets off right leg with left leg - - - - - -Very lovely piece of poem.Thank you very much for introducing us with this form of haiku- -AMERICAN SENTENCES.. and also informing about Paul E.Nelson's book.