Friday, July 17, 2015

July Love Comments

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My ache for you swallows me whole
On the outside I am cold
My face smooth as if I feel no pain
But on the inside my feelings are no longer caged
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Victoria Smith
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Paul Matthias 18 November 2015

This is nice Victoria (Y) . A poem of a love that isn't working right, a love that isn't meant to be. You want to let go but your heart says otherwise. But afterall, you still let go. I'M I RIGHT?

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Victoria Smith 18 July 2015

My face not mum face, it's not correcting properly for some reason.

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Hannington Mumo 18 July 2015

Broken love....The reality of life...10/10.

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