Sunday, September 11, 2011

Jully The Funny Dog. Comments

Rating: 2.5

I had a little puppy dog,
He was Jully the funny dog,
He did walk and sleep and run with me,
All I had to do was keep him clean.
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Meriam Joseph
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Stella Mary 30 December 2011

I like the poem. It was rhyming and full of love for your little puppy.

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Anupama Anpat 13 September 2011

i like the last stanza....its funny how u have described his bark and well projected his relationship with u. good work..

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Anita Khelawan 12 September 2011

your poem was very remarkable!

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Nanthinii Mohan 12 September 2011

the rhyming sense is fantastic.......the pun is good in the last two lines.....well done..

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Renu Kakkar 12 September 2011

a very nice story poem about your dog...

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Unwritten Soul 12 September 2011

Cute story..must be take care Jully always! nice write :) Unwritten Soul

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Rekha Mandagere 12 September 2011

Very natural feelings and love for faithful animal Dog :) Nice read

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Christina Phan 12 September 2011

Very funny and great poem 10+

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