I had a little puppy dog,
He was Jully the funny dog,
He did walk and sleep and run with me,
All I had to do was keep him clean.
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i like the last stanza....its funny how u have described his bark and well projected his relationship with u. good work..
the rhyming sense is fantastic.......the pun is good in the last two lines.....well done..
Cute story..must be take care Jully always! nice write :) Unwritten Soul
Very natural feelings and love for faithful animal Dog :) Nice read
I like the poem. It was rhyming and full of love for your little puppy.