Jukebox Blues Comments

A beautiful write with the memory of your dear friend Jenny whose life was so difficult because of the man she fell in love with, it has happened to so many. A heartfelt write with a beautiful, positive ending!

I like it. In the third line from the end, however, you meant WHOSE instead of WHO'S. WHO'S is an abbreviation for WHO IS. WHOSE is possessive. Trust me; I used to be an English teacher.