Tuesday, July 15, 2014

Juicy Summer Comments

Rating: 3.6

The fresh water in my flesh
The burning sun in my red lips
The sand in my bright skin
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Luana Del Lobo
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 July 2014

The more you squeeze The more you get! Juicy summer nicely brought out in the beautiful poem. Thank you.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 23 July 2014

fruitful poem, profound

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Nice summation of Nature..........Luana............well composed............

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