Wednesday, April 7, 2010

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Rating: 2.8

The waitress with the orange hair keeps motionin' me to hurry up and leave
I gulp my coffee - burn my mouth - grab up my coat and slippin' out
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Shel Silverstein
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roman 12 April 2018

why was he naked in the poem

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Susan Williams 04 November 2017

I see The Hater has been pouring his dislikes indiscriminately over the comments below. I am surprised that someone of such a narrow and jealous character has joined a group of hard-working writers. I enjoyed the story of this poem- I believe and hope the misspelling of wastin' was deliberate... it seemed in tune with the character of the man. Now I shall go and like every comment below just to even the score with The Hater.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 November 2017

A great write but the spelling of waistin' has been overlooked. I love his book, The Giving Tree, one of the best.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 November 2017

The poem is a pleasure to read. The weaknesses and shortcomings of oneself is beautifully drawn in this piece. Great write.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2017

Hey, I just come in here to talk to GOD… hope I'm not waistin' anybody's time...lovely theme.Moving and stunning.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 November 2017

Praying is the best weapon to beat the devil.... nice poem by Shel Silverstein

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 04 November 2017

11/4/2016........? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 November 2016

A beautiful poem with a message. Love its flow and finishing. Enjoyed.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 November 2016

Excellent poem and a pleasure to read. Congrats on the modern poem of the Day. Thanks for sharing it here.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 November 2016

I just come in here to talk to GOD… hope I'm not wastin' anybody's time..... I enjoyed reading it... Thanks....

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 November 2016

For some coffee. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kim Barney 04 November 2016

Three times the word 'waistin' was used, and it should have been 'wastin' instead. I can't believe Shel Silverstein would have misspelled it, so it must have been the person who typed it into Poem Hunter's database. Does anybody out there have a copy of this poem printed in a book and can check if this is really the way Silverstein spelled the word? By the way, I really enjoyed the poem except for the misspelled word. Silverstein is one of my favorite poets.

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