Judgment Day Comments
the clouds are coming
the storm is drumming
soon it will be too late
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So you are currently in the middle of a literal storm. Did you write this one today or is this an older one that you chose to post? Just curious. :) I like the flow of the writing and the rhyming. Yes, judgement day is coming for us all...nothing we can do to stop it. Like the storm. Thanks Barry.
I wrote this about a year ago. In Florida there is always a storm in summer. Usually they dont last three days though. Glad you liked it.
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8/20/2025 3:44:17 AM # 1.0.0
The tone of the poem is absolutely in tune with the topic. So well depicted. Full of your deep insight and vision.10
Thanks Nosheen. I always appreciate your comments.