Wednesday, April 25, 2018

Judgement Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

The grains of sand grow fewer each day,
The task of the hourglass is at hand;
Shamed by poor decisions that paved my way,
Tears flow like pearls from a broken strand
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Bipasha D 05 February 2019

Another admirable work. Indeed, our life depends on the series of choices we make. Sometimes we have no control on situations but always have a choice.

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Lora Colon 05 February 2019

Life is indeed a series of choices. But we cannot always determine if the ones we make are right or wrong. Thank you for your insightful comment.

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Bri Edwards 08 May 2018

1ST STANZA is not clear to me. i read on.... bashful virgins are my favorites! ! ! I'm liking: As my conscience plots its alibi; tell your 'HEART' to go fly a kite! ! i'm times out in less than a minute here at library computer. bri :) ok, less than two.. HAVE A NICE DAY! ! ! Guilty stanza is my favorite so far.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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