Friday, September 25, 2009

Judgement Day Comments

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Trembling I walk slowly behind
Nervous and scared not knowing why
They take their seats so at ease
I take my seat, a lions den I feel
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Tharindu Atukorala
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Chinedu Dike 27 August 2020

An insightful and poignant bit of verse well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Tharindu.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 29 September 2009

the wording and the way of expression merit you to be a poet. shan

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Obinna Eruchie 27 September 2009

What a feeling of tension, she went through. A piece well expressed.

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Vijay Menon 27 September 2009

its a very nice poem our cultures are so same 10+++

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Tharindu Atukorala

Tharindu Atukorala

Colombo, Sri Lanka
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