Saturday, January 21, 2012

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The mouth watering taste of forbidden fruits
Is what they say attracts doomed lovers
And once the foreign taste touches your lips
Makes your mind flip
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john wake
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Alicia Meyers 22 January 2012

Wonderful poem. :) A good write. :)

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Victoria Gauci 21 January 2012

Passionate and forthcoming of the desire between two lovers. Very good.

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Roshni kumari 21 January 2012

A GOOD POEM TO READ.NICE.I WILL LIKE TO RANK IT AS GOOD AS I CAN.

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mombasa, kenya
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