Friday, June 19, 2015

Joy Ride Comments

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Centuries before
Twin legs
Synchronously walking
So much toil
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Vijay Sai R
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Anish Debnath 16 September 2015

good way to describe need & the result of that very useful invention Vijay sir.nice one.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 15 September 2015

The environment and climate change that resulted by the involvement of human behavior a specific subject to all and this is a wonderful poem.

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Allotey Abossey 20 June 2015

Technology has helped in many ways.... It has also helped in the cancellation of 5 basic education final papers in my country just this week. I love the flow of the poem.. Good organization. God bless you

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Scince has aken leap forward men has moved onward many boundries have been opened distance too has been reduced

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Kewayne Wadley 19 June 2015

Nicely written! Eco-friendly. A great poem about the environment as well as the invention of the bicycle I also like the pace you kept of the story as it progressed

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Trichy, South India
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