# Joy Of The Whole Comments

So far the rating is there racing also will be there...truth is...only time and years alone will decide the standard of work..I've already commented at the other poem of your request...and thanks for your suggestion on the specified .com...I'll go through it in comming days....thanks a lot SL

A very good poem. Sometimes competition is good and can make it complete. Too much pushing can do harm. Good write. Your friend Lynn

Well stated poem Sam! This poem speaks to a mortal condition about one human failure-the 'joy of the whole' instead a single person being part and partial of the whole.A solid 10

Excellent! my friend, let me remind all of us, that 'WISDOM is not a priviledge but gift given to us by our creator to be share with the world', keep it up,10++++

i haven't noticed competition anywhere here...have noticed greed only...every fore-runner would have a sweating limit you know!

I have always hating competing. Maybe this is the reason why? Profound honesty.

Profound philosophy my friend. Well done!

‘…the joy of this whole // is embedded within // each of our souls…’ Most reflective part to me … Universal Us [a poem of me] … the choicest focus 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

TRUE! OUR SOUL REMAINS ONLY AS A PART OF THE UNIVERSAL SOUL, AND ONE DAY MUST UNITE TO BECOME A COMPLETE WHOLE! This has been the message of Hindu philosophy also! Plato's ideal 'Form' - was called by Neo-platonists as the 'Good' or the 'ONE'! St. Augustine baptised Plato's pagan philosophy and called that 'Good' = GOD! Ever since the the Medieval philosopher spent their life-time proving the existence of God with Logic & faith! FOR YOUR POEM 10! (Kindly read my 'An Introduction to Medieval philosophy' on page 2) Thanks, - Raj

the joy of this whole is embedded within each of our souls excellent abstract poem, thank you for sharing.

all of our lives we compete, from childhood school days to the workforce and it becomes automatic, but your heart becomes stale and stagnant to all that you see, it is time to let our hearts roam free. beautiful write sam! thanks for sharing

The whole business world is surviving on cut throat competition. A sound advice is given in the poem not to compete, but enjoy the joy of the whole. Nice.

I see myself so inferior to you already sir. And u win without competing. very fine poem sir. You are fit to be a philosopher enlightening us with the most common of truths and fats ignored everyday. Sree sree was a oet in A.P he led a revolution to goodwill influencing the youth. You must do your toil in Tamil Nadu. Sree Sree's simplicity yet complexity awed everyone, u have this thing in u sir go global sir.

A glorious theme well penned. We are already whole in our being and self but vainly search it outside in this material world. This is petty human nature.