Thursday, August 22, 2024

Joy Of Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

The snow melts away to reveal,
a landscape once again alive,
the warmth of sunshine on our skin,
brings joy and peace within.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rob Lamberton 03 September 2024

While some Spring others Fall, but certainly "joy and peace" for all!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 September 2024

The warmth and joy of spring so beautiful.........sweet poem Asim ji ...10

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Anjandev Roy 26 August 2024

Excellent short work...... thank u... friend.....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 August 2024

Short yet very beautiful Thanks for sharing this bravo-worthy poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 August 2024

Finest description about the first season of the year. Long time no see, Dr. Asim.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 August 2024

Beautiful! Just beautiful brevity. Enjoyed tremendously, felt under my skin and.....within! TOP Marks 5 Stars! Thank you for sharing this brevity, Dr. M. Asim Nehal!

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Kevin Patrick 22 August 2024

Spring the season of renewal, where life stretches into the renewal and rebirth of life. Captivating poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 August 2024

Spring, the season of renewal is beautifully depicted in this lovely short write. Great rhyme and rhythm.

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Darren Jkoeryo 22 August 2024

Short and sweet poem.

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