Joy Of Love (Love Poem) Comments

Hi Monica - nice love poem - I like the structure with each last line preserving the rhyme. It gives real flow and rhythm. The words you use in the first line are lovely - Peace - joy - Awake - Good - Sun - Dawn - Tingling laughter - Free heart. The second lines amplify these feelings 'A heart once lost is free at last - As I my love may meet'. This is a mega love poem.- thanks for sharing. Lov in poetry - JOHN.

a modern poet with great sense of rhyming

Nice expression of the hope that comes with new love! This line especially got me: The sun is stroking yonder trees And flowers rise to greet Very very good!

Lovely and romantic poem. good job! I hope you visit my poetry section...Merna

Beautiful. I love to read this poem.

Cute. I like your way of words

very nice. The computer won't let me say just very nice though, so I also like that the rhymes are unstrained and fairly original.