Joy! Joy! Joy! Comments

Thank you Shelbi for the correction, did not notice. I've bad habits for not checking for error. I do sing on the choir, last year while preparing for a Christmas Cantata we kept missing beats in this song. Instead it becomes an headache we all looked at each other and laugh. It was such fun. I'm happy you felt the JOY of what I was trying to relate to my reader. Bless you!

Thank you Shelbi for the correction, did not notice. I've bad habits for not checking for error. I do sing on the choir, last year while preparing for a Christmas Cantata we kept missing beats in this song. Instead it becomes an headache we all looked at each other and laugh. It was such fun. I'm happy you felt the JOY of what I was trying to relate to my reader. Bless you!

I really like the theme of this poem. The repetition of the word joy, the exclamation points and the general tone made me feel the joy in this poem. I felt the laughter and the happiness. One thing that confused me on the 8th line and throughout the poem is I think you misspelled soprano. Great job though!