Monday, March 7, 2016

Joy In My Eyes. Comments

Rating: 4.2

I kissed her lips.
I kissed her neck.

Lips became red,
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Dev Anand
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susheela Shiju 24 November 2018

beautiful poem 10

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Cigeng Zhang 15 March 2016

When in love, joy in eyes. True. A lovely work.

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Unwritten Soul 15 March 2016

It just like a piece of your sweet moment, its just like - its private too tell but too proud to share

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Mihaela Pirjol 12 March 2016

I love the innocence in this poem, especially this verse: '' and she was very shy. '' This is a lovely image!

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