Joy Forever Comments

I too have such a scene in mind…jumping and playing in the water…a joy forever! ! Thank you for recording this moment! !

Every moment the calm ripples are coming to them, They are breaking those in the wild game, Like a loving mother the river is enduring her sons, They are the sweetest to her in all lively forms... w onderful poetic imagination, river the mother loving her children playing on her waters. tony

Moments of joy for most of us is for sure our childhood memories. This work of your gives the reader the same joy in watching the play of children.

A wonderful poem that captures the joys of childhood and the wonders of nature. The vivid depiction of the beautiful scene makes a reader reminisce his /her childhood . Liked the two closure lines. Great imagery.

A magnificent piece of work with sparkling expression! My great pleasure revisiting this wonderful work!

Simple and elegant poem. You have capture a beautiful image with simple words. Thanks 4 sharin

Nice expression, nice experience, Thank you poet

I love the rythm. It is pure, simple and beautiful.

Another quotation... They are jumping and playing in the water, It is a joy forever. Every moment the calm ripples are coming to them, Simply the best..

The more simple the more beautiful... ...The boys are bathing in the river, The scene I will forget never, : : : : : : thanks

Like a loving mother the river is enduring her sons, They are the sweetest to her in all lively forms.....beautiful imagery.. River is our mother....and our life is life river...it flows..thanks dear friend

Like a loving mother the river is enduring her sons, They are the sweetest to her in all lively forms. the ripples and the wild play in the water... and your very fine conclusion about the love of the mother river and the nature......... than k u dear poet. tony

Well articulated and nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.

A lovely little poem Liked the delightful expression.. thanks for sharing....10

Nice experince, nice observation

Every moment the calm ripples are coming to them, They are breaking those in the wild game, like a loving mother........... so nice and simple realizations dear poet. thank you very much for this lovely poem, tony

Nicely envisioned, Anjandev. thanks

A nicely penned poem about childhood and nature.. Thank you for sharing..