Monday, March 11, 2024

Joy At The End - Rubaiyat Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky, a canvas of pastel shades, a work of art,
a masterpiece of light and color, a joy to the heart.
the clouds, they dance and twirl, a playful sight,
a reminder of life's simple joys, a beacon of light.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Bharati Nayak 15 March 2024

Your poem holds some lovely pictures of nature! Reading it fills the heart with joy.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 15 March 2024

Beautiful descrition. A romantic mind

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 March 2024

A well crafted poem depicting the wonders and beauty of nature. So true, a reminder of life's simple joys. Great images!

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 March 2024

Short and sweet write. So beautiful. Thanks.

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