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joy and sorrow is written from the innerthoughts......and great methophor used in zest..........

Two opposite feelings.But Lady Grace is right if your heart is full of joy there will be no space for sorrow. I can say that you are really a telented one.Keep up.

sorrow comes if without joy...so fill your heart with joy so that there's no space for sorrow..grace

would you not comeback to fold of tonight moments still remembers tinge of snow ...Oh! It touched me....a disguised episode cud be felt.....10++ Brishti

well crafted poem as always full of intense emotion and vivid imagery... thanks best regards, jdh

Fine words............. created fine word-picture! 10+

beautiful touching poetry...could alomost hear sad jazzy blues in the background...marvellous work.

Great work Doctor, i love your use of Metaphors

Every line is superb...excellent descriptive metaphors...marvellous expression and presentation....wonderful poem

Beautiful written and great topic. I like it very much :) - 10v. Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

i can see cognitive metaphors like: ''night seems to lie in deep sleep'' ''audacity of hope resigns to repose'' and visual metaphors like: ''rain was running in deep breath'' ''earth clenches mirth into riff of dusts'' in an excellent poem in which the two lovers seem totally absorbed in the idea of happiness. She is in a deep sleep and he is with eyes closed, but conscious. The nature fulfill this sense, by mystifying the soul and the body for the idea of absolute in love

two intense and opposite feelings converge in the beautiful personifications of this poem great! 10

good writing.. with brilliant insights.10