Tuesday, August 10, 2010

Joy And Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Waking up every morning with a giant smile on your face
But I can’t help but think that you’re lost without a trace

Laughing at everyone’s jokes even if they aren’t funny
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Rebecca Bell
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Dr John 05 September 2010

I like the sequence and rhyming.

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Kial Whitmire 10 August 2010

Telling one story but both sides of it.Not everything is what it seems, excellent examples here.10/10 keep them comin'

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Kevin Carney 10 August 2010

I really like this poem. I love the conflict that you show or should I say contridictions. It's a great write.

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