Thursday, May 3, 2012

Joy Comments

Rating: 5.0

To feel the sun upon my face
The dew beneath my feet
The soft and gentle summer breeze
Her perfume oh so sweet
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Valerie Dohren
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Smoky Hoss 13 July 2012

True poetic words; so much depth and wisdom here. Wonderful.

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James Casey 02 July 2012

Nice flow Val, Majestic wording

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Walterrean Salley 29 May 2012

Expresses the simple joys of life, often over looked. Simple joys that brings great pleasure, and makes each day worth while. Beautifully written. 10

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Juan Olivarez 17 May 2012

So very soothing and comforting, great as always Val.

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Unwritten Soul 13 May 2012

The joy that waht really played when i reading this, my mood wanna have some dancing with every lines, so beautiful i like it....I agree with Diane and Charles as the others too, simply like it :) _Unwritten Soul

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Danny Draper 08 May 2012

Joy is like this poem, the simple pleasures of peace and beauty which belies the actual intricacies that enmesh harmony.

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Wahab Abdul 06 May 2012

i really found this poem fantastic

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Captain Cur 06 May 2012

It is so refreshing to hear your poems of beauty celebrating the elements of life that we sometimes ignore or take for granted.

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Hans Vr 04 May 2012

What a great joy to read this poem. You describe so wonderfully and very poetically the joys of almost all senses including smells, sight, hearing and feeling. Fantastic poem, Valerie, I like it a lot.

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Patti Masterman 04 May 2012

What language, what harmony and beauty of simplicity you remind one of. :)

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G.R. Gaus 04 May 2012

We should all take the time to appreciate the simple things of nature that surround our daily lives, you have a way to make things feel better in your poetry. Nice write as always Valerie.....

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Dave Walker 03 May 2012

With the sun on your face just relaxing out in the garden, makes you feel great been alive. A wonderful poem.

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Joseph Anderson 03 May 2012

A joy to read.Uplifting, inspiring and pure, with a gentle, flowing simplicity

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Michael Morgan 03 May 2012

effortlessly organized; much harder than it looks; sensual, optimistic and outwardly focused. MM

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Simon Gowen 03 May 2012

Beautiful in its simplicity.

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Heather Wilson 03 May 2012

That is really beautiful Val, cheered me up no end, the sun shining, the birds singing, wonderful.

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