To feel the sun upon my face
The dew beneath my feet
The soft and gentle summer breeze
Her perfume oh so sweet
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Expresses the simple joys of life, often over looked. Simple joys that brings great pleasure, and makes each day worth while. Beautifully written. 10
The joy that waht really played when i reading this, my mood wanna have some dancing with every lines, so beautiful i like it....I agree with Diane and Charles as the others too, simply like it :) _Unwritten Soul
Joy is like this poem, the simple pleasures of peace and beauty which belies the actual intricacies that enmesh harmony.
It is so refreshing to hear your poems of beauty celebrating the elements of life that we sometimes ignore or take for granted.
What a great joy to read this poem. You describe so wonderfully and very poetically the joys of almost all senses including smells, sight, hearing and feeling. Fantastic poem, Valerie, I like it a lot.
What language, what harmony and beauty of simplicity you remind one of. :)
We should all take the time to appreciate the simple things of nature that surround our daily lives, you have a way to make things feel better in your poetry. Nice write as always Valerie.....
With the sun on your face just relaxing out in the garden, makes you feel great been alive. A wonderful poem.
A joy to read.Uplifting, inspiring and pure, with a gentle, flowing simplicity
effortlessly organized; much harder than it looks; sensual, optimistic and outwardly focused. MM
That is really beautiful Val, cheered me up no end, the sun shining, the birds singing, wonderful.
True poetic words; so much depth and wisdom here. Wonderful.