Joy Comments

A delicious poem which describes a child's joy and your own as well. It paints a picture in my mind of a big lollipop and a little girl licking for all her worth.....10 love Karin

What a different take on the theme.......a vivid perspective....absolutely charming, from the child point of view! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Angelic(Annie) Female (6/4/2009 1: 39: 00 PM) Lollipop........... What do these lines refer to specifically? touch, is a whop! get is a crop. after! a flop! to name, is shop! splendid line an ahalf RR......master of 'briefs' cheers

I would say that you responded to your 'lollipop' as a child who is in awe of what this sweet, (very large to a child as it includes the world as well) delicious naughty, yet wonderful lollipop can do for the child. I caught your glee in every lick Reshma! 10 Karin Anderson

Lollipop........... What do these lines refer to specifically?

wow these lines are soo very tasty..nice...i Liked it..how much for the lolli pop?

If you do any kind of work with glee the truth will set u free................lol.........: -)

wow, good lollipop poem bit...

Wow, you know the technique how to write short and cute pieces with deep sense! 10+++