Joy Comments

Great poem! Just wondering, do you even know who i am? it's someone in your class... good luck!

my grandma was standing behind me when i read this, i almost didn't get a chance to comment cuz of her nagging, **** her. but anyway... i really liked your intro stanza, and the middle one was nice too, but 'employs' might not be the right word...just a suggestion, you don't have to change it if you don't want to this reminds me of that 'joy' song we heard at the arts festival, it repeated 'joy' in the end several times, as your poem does...10 ^.^