Thursday, November 12, 2009

Journeywork Comments

Rating: ★0.0

What do you expect of this aging physique?
He closes his gloomy eyes but not blind
And he is like a quiet cup of tea but not dumb.
He never listens but not deaf.
...
Read full text

nimal dunuhinga
hero
COMMENTS
Alison Cassidy 17 November 2009

This poem tells so much more than its simple structure and economical use of words implies. A fine poem that has an appealing mix of angst and quite reflective ease. One of your best. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 15 November 2009

Fine interplay of both simile and metaphor. Simplicity is an art which is rarely achieved. Warm wishes, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Joseph Poewhit 12 November 2009

Just no respect anymore for good work. DICKENS KNEW

0 0 Reply
Marieta Maglas 12 November 2009

wonderful meditative poem, wonderful portrait.10

0 0 Reply
Load More...
nimal dunuhinga

nimal dunuhinga

kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
nimal dunuhinga
nimal dunuhinga
kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
Poet's Page Poems More
Close Activity Quotes Biography Comments Following Followers Statistics My Profile Add New Poem Add New Quote
Poemhunter.com
 Best Poems Best Member Poems Best Classical Poems New Poems New Poets Best Member Poets Best Classical Poets Explore Poems Explore Poets Poem Of The Day
Poems About
 Love Poems Baby Poems Death Poems Sad Poems Birthday Poems Wedding Poems Nature Poems Sorry Poems Hero Poems Poetry E-Books
Best Poets
 Robert Frost Maya Angelou William Shakespeare Pablo Neruda Langston Hughes Emiliy Dickinson Shel Silverstein William Blake Rabindranath Tagore William Wordsworth
Best Poems
 Phenomenal Woman Still I Rise The Road Not Taken If You Forget Me Dreams Annabel Lee Caged Bird If Fire And Ice On The Death Of The Beloved
Poem Hunter App Store
PoemHunter Facebook PoemHunter Twitter PoemHunter Instagram
About Us Copyright notice Cookie Policy Privacy Statement Contact Us Help Report Error Is Poem Hunter a legit site? Is Poem Hunter safe? Comunity Rules Privacy Policy Legal Terms Of Use

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

10/11/2025 11:24:25 PM # 1.0.0

Close
Error Success