Tuesday, April 21, 2009

Journeys End For The Poet Comments

Rating: 5.0

i am at my journeys end
looking back at my life, family, friends.

all my life i tried to be, smiling, happy, and carefree.
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louis rams
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Poetry is th key, to set a childs mind free... Perfect

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Christine Kerr 21 April 2009

Thought I could almost feel the bumps in this one, which I thought also gave it extra character. Hopefully it's all talk for now, Great write Louis 10+++

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Kranthi Pothineni 21 April 2009

A very beautiful message is woven by your words in this page. A truth about life is very well told. I had a nice read early in the morning. Thanks for sharing. It deserves many 10's.

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Sandra Fowler 21 April 2009

Very noble sentiments expressed here. They bear witness to both a fine poet and a worthy human being. God bless and take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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